In which we continue through the slush pile in search of gems. Please remember that when we reject a piece it may well be accepted elsewhere. There are many markets, and virtually each of them has a particular slant. I’ve heard from authors in the past who had a story rejected here only to publish it at a higher paying market. On the other hand, when I point out structural flaws in a story, you would be wise to at least consider the possibility that your story can be improved upon.
Story 9: SF 5000 words 1/2/2012
I like the opening paragraph very much and I like the way the story comes full circle to that image. I Continue reading